Body Or Heart
Anyone could have her body.
Only
YOU
could ever
have ever
will ever……
Have
….
Had…
Both
Anyone could have her body.
Only
YOU
could ever
have ever
will ever……
Have
….
Had…
Both
Deep and meaningful- well written, short and sweet 💜
Aww, I don’t have anything to say like the comments below (I’m not one for an abundance of flowery words, ironic right? Cause I kinda just did) but I loved the meaning behind this. And it’s: short, simple, strong with a jack-pack full of meaning!
This is really good! I love poetry that plays with formatting like this!! Can’t wait to read more of your work :)
I love the structure of your poem, it’s very creative and it emphasizes so well the idea of time, distance, emotional space. Great work!