WRITING OBSTACLE

You are a child who has lost their favourite toy on a day out, and bedtime is quickly approaching. Describe how this makes you feel.

Consider your language choice carefully here, and the age of the child. How do they display their emotions?

Meowy

Mommy says it’s almost time for bedtime

The rain and thunder scares me

Daddy says it can’t get me inside

Meowy will protect me

I will just grab….where is she?

Meowy?

MEOWY!

No, no, no!

I played with her outside

And now it’s pouring

She must be so cold

Tears rain down my face

Daddy braves the pelting water

To carry out a rescue mission

Lightning flashes, thunder cracks

I shudder and cower and yelp

Mommy holds me while I wait

Then the door opens

Meowy!

Daddy kneels down and hands her to me

She’s soaked but she’s here

I thank Daddy for saving her

Mommy dries Meowy

She lets me stay up until Meowy is done

I snuggle up in bed, covers over my head

With Meowy in my arms

Now both of us are safe

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