POEM STARTER
In the end, we only regret the chances we didn’t take.
Write a poem ending with this line.
POEM STARTER
In the end, we only regret the chances we didn’t take.
Write a poem ending with this line.
This is awesome, Blade. I’m not sure if I’m way off here but it almost feels like it has the tempo and lyrics to be rapped.
Agree with HM Elliot about the clay imagery. And I can so relate to the entire piece. Much of my life is creating drafts but rarely pushing through to actually “publishing” anything. I’m sure most authors can relate.
I really liked the bit at the end about the waste paper bin. Good job! Keep it up :)
Do you write much elsewhere?
Ummm MIC DROP! 🔥🔥 The flow, the pacing, the poise, the punch! Most impressive. I don’t want to give any change feedback because my notes would muddy such fresh waters. My favorite part (other than all of it) is the use of pottery. So inventive. So specific. This is a valuable piece of art!
This is very nice and it flows well