POEM STARTER
How could something so small take up so much space in my heart?
Compose a poem inspired by this question.
Obvious
Itβs you,
So hopelessly.
And through,
So mercilessly.
Itβs us,
So incredibly.
With trust,
Is understandingly.
Itβs me,
So tirelessly.
With free,
So monumentally.
β¦
Love You Baby π€
I really enjoyed this poem. I feel like with so few words and such little context, it shouldnβt make sense, but it does and definitely does a great job of evoking the feeling of falling in love. One way it could improve would be by focusing on the first word of each line. The second word carries all of the weight, but different starting words could affect the concentration of the words slightly. Less repetition of the beginning word could also help it flow a lot more
I appreciate the advice and will take on board for future pieces of this type, thank you π€
