COMPETITION PROMPT
Write a story where a character has been trusted to keep a special item safe.
COMPETITION PROMPT
Write a story where a character has been trusted to keep a special item safe.
I agree, you have a skill for writing. I’ve been told that I have but I’m only fourteen and I’ve thought about looking for people to help me with my writing but I’ve been to afraid of having my writing be awful compared to an amazing writer.
Nicely done! I think you captured the fear and terror of war really well. Whenever I watch something war-related I imagine the total dread and anxiety that it must involve.
From everything I’ve read of yours, you seem to do an awesome job at throwing it a plot twist where something unexpected happens. You captured it well here with the protagonist seemingly trapped and then saved by Allied troops.
You’ve got a skill for well-paced writing which encourages you to keep reading 😊