WRITING OBSTACLE
Describe a character's physical appearance through the eyes of someone who feels intense jealousy for them.
How accurate would the description be when tainted by strong emotion?
So what?
Like rivers joining hands in secret prayers
So flows her hair.
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Like purple skies that blossom into storms,
So shine her eyes.
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Like freshly painted berries into angelic frames,
So smile her lips.
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Like playful temptress godess with arms of butterflies,
So dances her body.
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Like knives forever stabbing, like fire in my skin,
Like ice inside my eyeballs, exploding from within!
Like I cannot breathe easy, like I canโt even cry!
So was your voice the moment
you choose her over meโฆ
Like dark and cold goodbye.
So what?