WRITING OBSTACLE

Describe a character's physical appearance through the eyes of someone who feels intense jealousy for them.

How accurate would the description be when tainted by strong emotion?

So what?

Like rivers joining hands in secret prayers

So flows her hair.

So what?

Like purple skies that blossom into storms,

So shine her eyes.

So what?

Like freshly painted berries into angelic frames,

So smile her lips.

So what?

Like playful temptress godess with arms of butterflies,

So dances her body.

So what?

Like knives forever stabbing, like fire in my skin,

Like ice inside my eyeballs, exploding from within!

Like I cannot breathe easy, like I canโ€™t even cry!

So was your voice the moment

you choose her over meโ€ฆ

Like dark and cold goodbye.

So what?

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