WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a calm, peaceful story used to aid sleep.

Utilise smooth rhythm and consider your sentence structures and syntax, avoiding phrases that would be jarring or throw the reader out of the story. The content of the plot matters less than the tone.

Dust

Calming is around you. You feel the earth beneath you. The ground starts shaking, to the point you crumble and become a tumbleweed in the wind, standing without feet. In the wind you feel your soul, bright and calm. Calmness sways, like a soft rhythmic song: a song in your heart and in your mind. Your mind is serene, unknowing and unseeing. Being a tumbleweed is simple, and you don’t have to worry. Just sway and tumble, tumble around and forget who you are. You will find yourself here: here in the moment, in the desert, moving along the dirt and sand, under the sun. There is a return to your being, and after knowing something so trivial, you understand that you are no different from the earth, the plants, the dust, and the sky.
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