Growing Up
It used to be easier to forgive than forget
The times when I was younger
The hurts only left a dent
Now I face adulthood
Broken hearts and grief
And then I realize forgiving is another feat
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It used to be easier to forgive than forget
The times when I was younger
The hurts only left a dent
Now I face adulthood
Broken hearts and grief
And then I realize forgiving is another feat
Great job with this poem - I thought it was a great way of representing an idea that we’ve all faced - well done!
I think your pacing is - for the most part - really good. Only the first line stands out to me as being out out sync with the rest - maybe it could be shortened to:
‘It used to be easier to forgive than forget.’
