WRITING OBSTACLE
Brutal. Foolish. Welcome.
Create a character inspired by these three words. You don't have to use them within the writing, but it should be clear which character traits link to these words.
WRITING OBSTACLE
Brutal. Foolish. Welcome.
Create a character inspired by these three words. You don't have to use them within the writing, but it should be clear which character traits link to these words.
What an INSANELY powerful first line — it instantly gripped me and made me want to read more! Your expertise is clearly the way you’re able to tug readers into your world and give them clear visualization of what is occurring. I noticed some slight capitalization and comma errors, but they definitely don’t take away from the power of your story. Hope to read more from you, this was amazing!