WRITING OBSTACLE
If victory had a literal taste, it would taste like…
A Winner’s Sacrifice
If victory had a literal taste, it would taste like blood. That pinch of an overpowering tingling sensation in your mouth which then sends shivers down your spine. For a moment, it feels refreshing. You close your eyes and take in that glorious pride basking in the winner’s spotlight. Until you realize, that’s your blood you’re tasting. It’s the victory of your own and not others. But you can’t hide the shame. So you gulp down the blood and painfully smile as it feels sharp going down. You’ve won, but at what cost?
Good but probably could be condensed down into a shorter paragraph
I love this!! ❤️