STORY STARTER
Step One: Marry the Prince.
Step Two: Murder the King and Queen.
I wasn’t at all prepared for Step Three.
STORY STARTER
Step One: Marry the Prince.
Step Two: Murder the King and Queen.
I wasn’t at all prepared for Step Three.
Wonderfully written I enjoyed it a lot I actually believe she did still have to kill the prince that was the only way her mother would enter the castle she had to keep the baby secret long enough to get away and if she ran away with out carrying out the plan I am certain that they would suspect something and go looking for her and I don’t know how else she would be able to not only tell her mother she was with child and escape successfully good job
I love this story. One little constructive thing that didn’t entirely go along with it was the fact that she killed the prince anyway. If she knew that killing the prince wouldn’t affect the magic and it would be pointless (bc she refused to kill her child) then I feel like she wouldn’t want to kill the prince for nothing. I feel like it would make more sense if she let the prince live and ran away from everything or tried something different. Lol I’m sorry I just got so invested in this. You are an excellent writer and I feel like you could make a book out of this if u wanted to expand it🙃