STORY STARTER
Write a scene or short anecdote about a character who works with young children as part of their job.
Children offer a huge amount of creativity and humour in daily life – what is it like for someone who works with them for a living?
STORY STARTER
Write a scene or short anecdote about a character who works with young children as part of their job.
Children offer a huge amount of creativity and humour in daily life – what is it like for someone who works with them for a living?
Hahah humorous and engaging! Poor teacher 😆
There were a couple of times where you switched tenses within the first few paragraphs which threw the narrative voice off a little, but after that it was all consistent. Also have a look over your dialogue, it flowed nicely but there some places where it’s not formatted how speech in a novel normally would be.
Otherwise an entertaining read! 😁
I’ve seen a lot of people struggle to write dialogue that sounds and flows like a real conversation. You’ve got it down. Great work!
I loved the structure of your writing, and the accuracy of teacher emotions 😂😂
I think this is creatively good as it’s hard to accurately portray the inner monologue of a teacher. It’s real, not under or over exaggerated.