POEM STARTER
Write a poem about the importance of hands in a relationship.
Think about the different types of relationship you could relate this to.
Thunderstorms
they were soft in the beginning
left goosebumps down my spine
a nervousness when they approached,
not ready for the tingles.
they now rocked me like a thunderstorm
a ball of nothingness swelled in my throat,
never counted on shooting stars
maybe
now is a good time to start
Comments 3
thanks guys ! i’ll work on it :)
I agree with Ryan, the first stanza flowed well but I wasn’t too sure what were you trying to say in the second. Keep up the good work though
I really liked the first four lines, it was flowing nicely but you lost me a bit at the second part. Overall, I’m really enjoying your poems so far. 😊
