STORY STARTER
You move into a flat with very thin walls, and can hear the people upstairs plotting something exciting.
Describe how you feel and what you do with the information.
STORY STARTER
You move into a flat with very thin walls, and can hear the people upstairs plotting something exciting.
Describe how you feel and what you do with the information.
Nice story! There is some room for improvement, but good! Nice job!👏🏻
I enjoyed it, but perhaps not for the correct reason xD
There is several words misused. Better words could have been used to describe the scene that was unfolding. There were several words that looked like they did not get fully typed and can frustrate avid readers. The only way this can make more sense is if the writer is trying to portray the first as someone who is drunk or high, but it really doesn’t come across that way at all.