WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a story where your characters communicate without using speech.
Perhaps create a narrative around a situation where the characters are not allowed to speak openly, relying on non-verbal cues to communicate.
WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a story where your characters communicate without using speech.
Perhaps create a narrative around a situation where the characters are not allowed to speak openly, relying on non-verbal cues to communicate.
You responded to the prompt well; however, there are some grammatical errors. In the fourth paragraph from the bottom, you wrote “excepting” where “expecting” should be. Also, the second sentence of the first paragraph contains unnecessary comma usage. You could have written “Her mouth was pinched and twisting like something sour lingered.” All in all, it’s a great piece! I hope this helps. :)