COMPETITION PROMPT

Write a poem in ‘revorto’ form.

A reverto poem uses couplets that alternate between one highly poetic and one very unpoetic line. The form is meant to jar the reader from a sense of poetic beauty to something other.

The Snail

The wind caught her hair like a golden sail

And I stepped on an unseen snail


Love struck like a gut feeling or a hunch

But all I could think of was that sickening crunch


She turned to seek the source of the sound

And saw me wiping my boot on the ground


She looked like a painting with a curious look

And watched as I pulled off my shoe and shook


She glided across the road with elegant ease

And asked if I could help with directions please


I took my chance to follow my heart to the brink

Barely finding words to ask her out for a drink


She responded with a voice like a piercing gale

‘No thanks, I saw you step on that snail.’









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