COMPETITION PROMPT
Write a poem in ‘revorto’ form.
A reverto poem uses couplets that alternate between one highly poetic and one very unpoetic line. The form is meant to jar the reader from a sense of poetic beauty to something other.
The Snail
The wind caught her hair like a golden sail
And I stepped on an unseen snail
Love struck like a gut feeling or a hunch
But all I could think of was that sickening crunch
She turned to seek the source of the sound
And saw me wiping my boot on the ground
She looked like a painting with a curious look
And watched as I pulled off my shoe and shook
She glided across the road with elegant ease
And asked if I could help with directions please
I took my chance to follow my heart to the brink
Barely finding words to ask her out for a drink
She responded with a voice like a piercing gale
‘No thanks, I saw you step on that snail.’