STORY STARTER
'It’s hard to be inconspicuous when you’re hanging upside down.'
Write a story that starts with that line.
The Struggles Of A Fine Art Thief
It’s hard to be inconspicuous
when you’re hanging upside down,
And the propelling gear from Temu
Has twisted round and round
It’s hard to steal a priceless painting
When lasers block your path
And the anti-laser suit you bought
Would barely fit your cat
It’s hard to be a fine art thief
In this ai generation
For there never was a better thief
Than ai impersonation
It’s hard to write this poem
From a prison, dark and cold
—Your final resting place
For that forgery you stole
This is a fun read! Humorous and a good message. This is more a stylistic thing, but you might want to play around with rhythm. Sometimes cutting filler words can make the poem flow more nicely. Love this!! Keep up the good work.
Thank you! I’ll start paying attention to rhythm and filler words! I really appreciate the feedback! I would love to improve.
Feedback is always welcome 🙏 . Not sure how I set it to no feedback, didn’t mean to!
