he is not perfect
but he does not hide his flaws
he embraces them
just as he embraces me
he is my love, forever
she is not perfect
and i see the makeup that
changes her beauty
from real to artificial
do i want her forever?
This is super well written! I really like this whole concept
short and sweet; just how I like my poems...
(totally not bc I'm short or anything)
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Woah—I love the structure of this and both povs!! The fact that the girl is 100% sure of things and the guy is on the edge is SO GOOD. Now you’ve got me wondering how things end up. The title wraps it up nicely too. Such a yummy poem.
