VISUAL PROMPT
by Sans @ deviantart.com/Sanskarans

Write a story titled "When I Look in the Mirror".
VISUAL PROMPT
by Sans @ deviantart.com/Sanskarans
Write a story titled "When I Look in the Mirror".
Wooo I love sequels 🥳
Yay, a squel!
I think your idea is very creative. Try changing some of your verbs to be more descriptive. An example is changing ‘go’ to ‘attend.’ I also notice that you use ‘I am’ a lot and you can rearrange your sentences to avoid redundant phrases. Keep writing because you have got great ideas and with practice comes progress!
This is really great, especially after I noticed that you were only nine! One piece of advice I have to offer is to try not to make your sentence so clunky. You have to make them flow!