WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a description of a fireworks show as though observing it from above.
What is emphasised from the sky, and what goes unnoticed?
Fireworks From Above
It looks like rain, fired from the deep
Like splotches of mystical saliva
And the sound it makes, a pixie’s scream
Followed by clumsy giants
It tastes like cherry but ends in tangerine
And there’s a tartness long after
That begs to be solved with yet another bite
Mixed with the cool taste of evening clouds
It’s cheers falling upwards
Abstract drips
Sprinkles of light
Illuminating flecks of its point of origin
And mystifying the rest of us, I suppose
It’s a treat, not a meal
A rare indulgence
I love how you describe the fireworks in other senses than sight! It adds a whole new level of satisfaction to experience it in that way. Thanks for sharing!
Thanks, Hailey!
I agree, that was very creative of you!
Oh my word. I never knew fireworks could be described so brilliantly, but so accurately! I love this description so much!!
Many thanks!!
This is so creative! “It tastes like cherry but ends in tangerine” it not something I would have thought of but it is an amazing description!
Thank you!! I realize I’m behind on getting through your writings - I plan on checking them out this evening 🤗