WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a description of a fireworks show as though observing it from above.

What is emphasised from the sky, and what goes unnoticed?

Fireworks From Above

It looks like rain, fired from the deep

Like splotches of mystical saliva

And the sound it makes, a pixie’s scream

Followed by clumsy giants


It tastes like cherry but ends in tangerine

And there’s a tartness long after

That begs to be solved with yet another bite

Mixed with the cool taste of evening clouds


It’s cheers falling upwards

Abstract drips

Sprinkles of light

Illuminating flecks of its point of origin

And mystifying the rest of us, I suppose


It’s a treat, not a meal

A rare indulgence

Comments 10

I love how you describe the fireworks in other senses than sight! It adds a whole new level of satisfaction to experience it in that way. Thanks for sharing!

Thanks, Hailey!

I agree, that was very creative of you!

Oh my word. I never knew fireworks could be described so brilliantly, but so accurately! I love this description so much!!

Many thanks!!

This is so creative! “It tastes like cherry but ends in tangerine” it not something I would have thought of but it is an amazing description!

Thank you!! I realize I’m behind on getting through your writings - I plan on checking them out this evening 🤗