STORY STARTER
Write a story in which the first word of each sentence forms the words of a spell.
Try to incorporate the spell somehow into the story, what is it for? Is the protagonist a wizard, or is it said in jest?
STORY STARTER
Write a story in which the first word of each sentence forms the words of a spell.
Try to incorporate the spell somehow into the story, what is it for? Is the protagonist a wizard, or is it said in jest?
I really love this, it’s amazing. When I read it I imagine it being like a war with like a kingdom like in fantasy stories and stuff and I really like it
I love the metre and rhyme, and the way the first letter of every sentence writes out the message. I know that isn't what the prompt said, but I often take the prompt as something that should inspire your work, rather than rule it. Fantastic work ❤️❤️
This is beautifully done.
A few grammar and punctuation issues. A couple of questions without marks. A few sentences that seem a bit of a stretch.
But I really enjoy the work. I like the flow of it. Well done.
Very good piece of writing, because of the rhyme scheme and the somewhat presence of meter it comes off as a poem more than a short story. If a story is what you are trying to go for maybe think about describing setting and describing your characters.
I’d say try and incorporate more diverse punctuation, there were also a few instance where you repeated words and it sounded slightly awkward; like “rest”.
But otherwise like I said it’s good piece of writing, very cohesive.