Inner Critic

What a notion

To finish a poem

With such a line

That is just fine

And not only that

But it’s meaning is flat

Stretching this metaphor wide

So it fits round the side

And to the end to make sense

How can we shut what must be an omen

It’s very clear that the implement is broken

I cannot conceive that this would be spoken

“He shut the door wide open” Aha!

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