WRITING OBSTACLE
Inspired by Leona McNeil
Your character is sitting an exam that they absolutely must pass. Create a narrative focusing on their emotions during this scene.
Don’t focus on the event; focus on the character's thoughts and feelings, and how this situation affects them.
Price of Greed
“Spare a dollar?”
A disheveled man called.
He reeked of the streets,
“Where’s your blue collar?”
I asked in return,
I worked for these sheets,
Won’t give it for a holler.
“Humanity not enough?”
His slurred voice rang.
Why won’t he let up?
“I won’t pay your next puff.”
I turned to leave,
no beggar deserves sup’s
no matter how rough.
“As you turn your back astray
Consider me again
When your life is being amounted
on judgement day”
His voice filled the vacant air.
Fallen onto a deaf heart
As the most important test of all
I had unknowingly failed.