POEM STARTER
Awakening
Write a poem about an awakening - it could be literal or metaphorical.
POEM STARTER
Awakening
Write a poem about an awakening - it could be literal or metaphorical.
Love the repetition!
I enjoyed reading this a lot! You did a very nice job using references like Bonnie and Clyde as well as Elm Street near the end and I think it added to the overall impact. While I was reading, I think I noticed some unintentional comma misplacements and capitalized words such as “overwhelmed, over joyed ,over stimulated.” and “I have Regrets” used one time in the middle of the poem vs “I have regrets”. You could improve your future writing by double checking for these little things if they are not intentional. Otherwise, it was very lovely!
I enjoyed this piece a lot, very cool use of the prompt!
“How could a man claim his love for you but doesn’t crave to be near you.” - such a hard-hitting line