We were perfect -nothing is perfect 22 and dating -serious or for fun?

a whole 4 years -on and off or regular? met in college -which class

dinners were our thing -dinners are everyone's "thing" with only candles to brighten the room -whose house

snuggles and kisses came and went -went? we got drunk together -that's terrible

only of course,

once we were 21 -thank goodness

one night I had a sleepover

at your dorm -please don't go where I think it's going

we threw pillows, kissed -so a pillow fight or? and ate cheese -WHICH TYPE?

that was all

all it was ever going to be -sigh

22 made it seem like love -_ha! you don't know what love is at twenty two _ only we never said it -first couple ever

but one day

you did -which day?

my heart swelled

I kissed you a thousand times -_nice metaphor _

but I never said it back -you are a child

because deep down

my heart didn't long for you I didn't miss you like I did my mother -what's you relationship like with your mother?

loving you,

I tried -harsh, but perfectly put ending