WRITING OBSTACLE
Choose one of your own writings, and critique it as if it were an award-winning novel or poem with outstanding reviews.
Try to shamelessly pick out positives that can be emphasised in a hyperbolic review-style summary. (Please do not review other people's work!)
Picky about 'love'
**We were perfect -**_nothing is perfect_
**22 and dating -**_serious or for fun?_
**a whole 4 years -**_on and off or regular?_
**met in college -**_which class_
**dinners were our thing -**_dinners are everyone's "thing"_
**with only candles to brighten the room -**_whose house_
**snuggles and kisses came and went -**_went?_
**we got drunk together -**_that's terrible_
**only of course,**
**once we were 21 -**_thank goodness_
**one night I had a sleepover**
**at your dorm -**_please don't go where I think it's going_
**we threw pillows, kissed -**_so a pillow fight or?_
**and ate cheese -**_WHICH TYPE?_
**that was all**
**all it was ever going to be -**_*sigh*_
**22 made it seem like love -**_ha! you don't know what love is at twenty two _
**only we never said it -**_first couple ever_
**but one day**
**you did -**_which day?_
**my heart swelled**
**I kissed you a thousand times -**_nice metaphor _
**but I never said it back -**_you are a child_
**because deep down**
**my heart didn't long for you**
**I didn't miss you like I did my mother -**_what's you relationship like with your mother?_
**loving you,**
**I tried -**_harsh, but perfectly put ending_