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POEM STARTER
Submitted by Freddie
Life Without You
Write a poem or short story about what life would be like without the person you care about the most.
Scrérateur
Jan 28, 2023
Tor·ture
noun: -great physical or mental suffering or anxiety.
-a cause of great suffering or anxiety.
I enjoy writing, but I'm still working on getting good at it. If you have any tips or criticism, it is all welcome.
NoSpark
2 years ago
It’s creative and [somewhat] meaningful. Perhaps it is supposed to be dramatic but I feel that there is a more fitting word for the feeling of separation and/or nonexistence of a loved one. I hope my feedback somewhat helps with something.
