WRITING OBSTACLE

Describe a character's physical appearance through the eyes of someone who feels intense jealousy for them.

How accurate would the description be when tainted by strong emotion?

Polaris

I want you to hold me in 

your hands like a cup 

Desire me like hot tea 

on a frosty day 

As I scald your lips

You feel the burn and say

Stella Maris.

You are a confetti bomb About to scatter into A million tiny pieces

But I just need one to Flatter catch it In my hair trapper

I want you to hold me in Your hands like a plug

And watch me disappear Water down the drain

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