WRITING OBSTACLE

Describe the feeling of somberness without using closely related synonyms such as stern, depressed, or sad.

Try to use a variety of metaphorical devices to create an image that emits a sense of somberness.

A Backpack Of Rocks

YA fiction

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I found a backpack on the side of the road

I was 9

Sometimes people would put rocks in it

It hurt i didnt know why

When i turned 10

People would yell

I would put rocks inside my own backpack

I didnt know why

I was 12

My backpack was full

Why i did i do this

Why did i even bother

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Lani

Hi my name Is Alana (she/he/they) I love writing poems and story’s I play guitar (acoustic and electric), a lot of my poems are about an old friend who was kinda a bitch to me, :)