WRITING OBSTACLE
"One man's trash is another man's treasure."
Write a detailed description of an object that would appear to have little value, but is incredibly important to you or a character.
WRITING OBSTACLE
"One man's trash is another man's treasure."
Write a detailed description of an object that would appear to have little value, but is incredibly important to you or a character.
This is a good piece about letting go and it’s really good to see you have taken onboard the comments about keeping the language simple. Keep up the good work
I love this! It really shows the connection a person can have with a valued object from their childhood, but also how hard it is to let it go. Also, compared to your other piece, I believe it is much better, as it’s easier to understand with less complex words to keep it more simple and engaging.