Christmas Shopping
Quick, ragged breaths.
Jogging down the street.
Eyes watering, feet knocking on unyielding pavement
Zebra crossing, yellow lines.
Voice hoarse, needy;
“I Must. Acquire. Xmas gifts!”
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Quick, ragged breaths.
Jogging down the street.
Eyes watering, feet knocking on unyielding pavement
Zebra crossing, yellow lines.
Voice hoarse, needy;
“I Must. Acquire. Xmas gifts!”
This was done perfectly! Great job 😊
I loved the pacing here as well as the line “Zebra crossing, yellow lines,” I thought this was done very well.
The stress of Xmas was really shown through this poem haha great job!