STORY STARTER
Submitted by Isabelle Rose
Write a story where the main character is dying, and nobody knows but them.
STORY STARTER
Submitted by Isabelle Rose
Write a story where the main character is dying, and nobody knows but them.
This is l good and a very creative way of taking the prompt! Good story overall.
I think many of these moments could have been stretched out further. I imagine the sentence where she heads home to cottage could have had more emotional impact where the main character suffers inner turmoil about what she has to do.
I really like the sentence, “Quietly, slowly, so even my sluggish and hazy brain can understand.” The word choice is very good an adds to the mood of the story and both the warlock’s and protagonist’s characterization.
Followed, and keep writing!