WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a gossip session between two friends which suddenly turns very serious.

How can you use dialogue and speech tags to convey the change of tone?

Did You Hear?

Did you hear?

No. About what?

WHAT? You SERIOUSLY didn’t hear?

I paused. Keeping my mouth shut


Did you seriously not already see what’s on the news?

I shook my head, dumbfounded, looking confused


Oh boy, oh boy….you sure are going to be shocked

I began to perspire as my jaw started to lock


I was frozen in time, I could not move one foot

Anxious and nervous, until in my hands the remote was put


I clicked the red button and pointed it at the screen

I saw a photo of my face with the words “TRAGIC. DEAD TEEN”

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