WRITING OBSTACLE

Submitted by Maranda Quinn

Show a powerful emotion – love, grief, rage - in a quiet, everyday moment.

Instead of writing a dramatic and drawn out scene, think about how subtle actions and sensory details can carry the weight of the feeling.

Tulips

The paved street is empty as I walk slowly through the morning mist. The sun is just starting to rise, casting the stone a golden gleam.

I inhale the fresh scents of lavender and rose growing on the corners of the street, swaying in the gentle breeze.

Suddenly a heavy feeling settles on my chest, like a stone resting its weight on my heart. The tulips in the cafe window bring me this feeling of _grief_.

I stare at the vibrant tulips for a moment and then continue my walk, but that feeling of grief still settles within me.


She always loved tulips.

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