STORY STARTER
Submitted by Lana Rose
Time keeps randomly stopping around you, and you think it is you who is doing it. Then one night you are at a party, and time stops. Everyone is frozen, except one person at the other end of the room...
The One
Reaching for more shrimp cocktail,  our eyes like from across the room.
It’s you I know it, I’m the chosen one and you’ve come to get me.
Frozen in fear, I can only stand there staring into your eyes. I start to back up, like I was going to run away and then so do you.
***idk how to finish this…..
Can someone tell me an I using the right words (should I be using him instead of you)
Hey! Your piece has this cool mix of mystery and suspense. I'm intrigued by the time-stopping concept and the focus on one person moving in this frozen scene. As for your question, using “you” creates a more direct connection with the reader, making them feel involved in the situation! ☺️
Awesome! TY
