POEM STARTER

Write a poem that is titled ‘Daydreaming’.

It might be useful to consider escapism as being both good and bad in this poem.

Daydreaming.

Daydreaming is my escape,

It is where I take my breaks,

I float in the depths of my mind,

Feeling elated, feeling sublime.


I dream of what I long to have;

Like the bliss of not feeling mad,

Holding onto the friends out of reach,

Her sweet lips forcing me to not speak.


I dream of the possible future;

Where I’m safe, sound, and structured,

Where hatred dries to a measly puddle,

And I’ve finally popped my taunting bubble.


I dream of what likes to gift me glee;

For one, the awakening stings of creativity,

All the artwork my hands itch to create,

My daydreams numb me for my joy’s sake.


But it’s not long until the escape wears,

I always forget the sentiments it entails,

When I remember it’s all a dream within,

My woes begin to whirl up again.

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I felt you in this❤️

I’m glad you could understand! 💞✨

Very lovely! It’s such a sweet poem. It’s been about 20 years since my creative writing classes, but when I was reading it, a lot of it fell into a rhythmic meter, but there were a few lines that broke it. I think you could rework a few lines if you wanted it to fit that type of flow.

Yeah, I noticed the rhythm is messed up too now looking back at it lol. Thank you so much for letting me know and thank you again for reading my poem! 💗✨

This is really great, it resonates with me a lot! I like the 4th stanza a lot, as well as the 1st! Really beautiful piece of poetry

Thank you so much!! I really appreciate it! 🫶🏾✨

You’re welcome! :) you are very talented, good job.

Thank youuu! You’re talented as well! ✨

Love the line “The sweetness of her lips forcing me not to speak.” The juxtaposition of sweetness with force…very cool.

Thank you so much! ✨💕