Forest
you could see it in his eyes
the pain
the torture, that followed her
and her demons
who dance on graves
and burn down forests
just because they can.
his forest was ling gone
but maybe there was hope for hers.
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you could see it in his eyes
the pain
the torture, that followed her
and her demons
who dance on graves
and burn down forests
just because they can.
his forest was ling gone
but maybe there was hope for hers.
This reads as a poem about one person having already lost their way seeing salvation in another’s. I like the way the lack of punctuation is applied here because each line is short and sharp. I did get a little confused at first, though, because you started with the male character and then immediately went into the female character with it sounding like you were still talking about the male charcater
Hey this is good but could use some grammar improvements. Also maybe try to explain things a little better unless you were going for the whole mystery thing, and in that case just ignore that part.
