WRITING OBSTACLE

By Kevin Grieve @ Unsplash

Open a horror or thriller story with the scene of a duck gently touching down in misty waters.

Swan Lake

I watch across the lake as a swan descends from the heavens

As it approaches the water, wings extend as the swan gracefully kisses the water, settling into a slow drift

It had to be less than 10 seconds, maybe even 9, or 7

But then the water turned black, a dark energy shift


The swan took notice and began to head for shore

I watched dumbfounded, shaken to my core

The swan was within, what must have been 10 feet from land

Until it got yanked underwater, by a bloody black hand

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