POEM STARTER
"Love is the lie that keeps us alive."
Use this as the first or last line of a poem in any style.
POEM STARTER
"Love is the lie that keeps us alive."
Use this as the first or last line of a poem in any style.
I like where ur going w this but I think you should go over it for grammar checks and things like that. Some things I see are ‘but deep inside you know its for fun’ should be smth like ‘but deep inside you know it’s just for fun.’ Don’t forget that ‘ in the ‘its’. Also the line ‘lies that shown behind our eyes’ should be show instead of shown. Honestly though hide would be a more fitting word altogether imo. Anyways j go over it a bit to fine tune it. Hope that helps!
I like how it's so relatable because, well, let's face it, relationships are complicated sometimes.
The way you described “white lies” and how we might say “I love you” even when it's not entirely true is an interesting take. Love and lies are indeed intertwined in many ways, as your poem highlights.
Keep up the good work! 😊