WRITING OBSTACLE

Start a scene from an omniscient point of view, and then zoom in to a first-person perspective.

Focus on how the shift changes the reader's connection to the story.

Anti Love

They were two young lovers. All they ever wanted in life was to live as they pleased and have the world see them as what they truly were: really truly infatuated with each other. Despite this, it seemed society saw them as nothing more than children playing at a relationship. It caused them to fracture to the point where they didn’t even know what love meant anymore.

I never meant for it to be this way. All I wanted to do was love her. Because no one cared, I don’t know what to do. I don’t even know if I should stay with her anymore. I wish I wasn’t here like this. At first we had plans for our future but now we don’t know what we’re doing.

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