STORY STARTER

Submitted by Celaid Degante

Leaving

Write about a character leaving something, or someone, they love.

song

i wanted you to think im smart

never thought that i would seem naive

now all i’ve gots my broken parts

cause you said you would never leave


i guess you didn’t think that through

didn’t think you’d have a change of heart

cause what you said was never true

by leaving me you’re leaving you

Comments 7

I really like this u were able to complete a short poem which is really hard to do love the rhyming!!

Only feedback: capitalize words at beginning of each poem line! That might make it flow better!!

haha yes sorry my auto cap is off

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