WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a short story or paragraph in passive voice only.
The passive voice places emphasis on the thing rather than the person doing the thing: e.g. “The book was read” rather than “She read the book”.
Cake
The cake was eaten, I waited all day and worked my bum off knowing I was going to eat the cake. cheeky sod ate the cake. Worked hard baking the cake knowing that the cake would be there waiting but no no no the cake was eaten. All I see is crumbs and the knife that was used to cut the cake. I’m going to take this knife and find the sod.
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