STORY STARTER
Submitted by Sam Taylor
Write a story where the main character enters a consciousness of a close friend in their life.
How does your protagonist feel after seeing themselves through their friends perspective?
STORY STARTER
Submitted by Sam Taylor
Write a story where the main character enters a consciousness of a close friend in their life.
How does your protagonist feel after seeing themselves through their friends perspective?
Considering that this is your first writing it is very, very well done. It is an interesting read but I do suggest that you capitalize your letters after the end of a sentence. It is a simple and common mistake but it is nice to avoid.
This is a really good first writing! I thoroughly enjoyed it! You should be very proud! I look forward to reading more of your stories!
Love seeing people start on a creative path and what a start, onwards and upwards
You’re doing a good job for just starting! I like this piece and the rhetorical questions at the end! I would recommend breaking the text into more defined paragraphs like some other writings on here, so it’s easier to read. Good luck with your writing journey :>
Great start! You are the right path, don’t be so hard on yourself, this is not bad, not at all! 🤩