STORY STARTER

‘With the final flickering of the lights, I took a deep breath, knowing I had done everything I could to save us.’

Write a story that concludes with this line. Think which kind of storylines could logically lead to this finale.

Patrick

The water was knee height when I walked out of my bedroom. What the hell had happened? My brand new school shoes were soaked and I head to even worn them one day yet! “Mum!” I yelled, “What’s going on?” The lights faltered for a second, springing on and off. Water gushed out from what seemed like nowhere. It was already up to my hip. “Dad!” Dom cried out. I rushed towards his room, but I didn’t need to. We met in the middle of the hall. “Paddy, why is there water everywhere?” He asked. “I don’t know,” I said, “are you ok?” “I guess so, but where’s mum and dad?” “I don’t know,” I said again. I felt so stupid. I was supposed to be his older brother, but I think I was failing. “Stay here,” I decided. I took a breath and swam downstairs. Thankfully, the console table was just next to the stairs. Opening the draw with one hand, I crossed the other’s fingers. I scrambled around at the contents that weren’t of any use, but I couldn’t find the keys to the door. Quickly, I grabbed onto the stairs and pushed myself up, gasping for air as I resurfaced. The water had risen to chest height bu the time I was down there. Water splashed onto our heads from the ceiling. I picked up Dom the water was almost up to his head. “How is that even possible?” I shouted at it. “Are you ok?” Dom asked. “Yes, yes, I’m fine,” I said, “but the door keys aren’t there!” “Oh no! What are we going to do? Are we going to die?” He stressed. “No, we’ll be ok.” I reassured him, not even believing it myself. I could feel my neck beginning to be splattered with the water, gradually creeping to my face. “Deep breath, Dom!” I said. He sobbed in reply. With the final flickering of lights, I took a deep breath, knowing I had done everything I could to to save us.
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