WRITING OBSTACLE
Write about a place only by describing what is not there.
Usually it is important to note the things that are present in an environment – so try focusing on the abscences to see if we can envisage your setting.
What Did I Do
When I woke up
There was no TV
No dresser no nice clothes or anything else
That was in my room at home. I was greeted by a man with a deep voice and a blue shirt and black pants on.
Count time mother fucker
He said as he opened the door to this new and unfamiliar place
I wasn’t sure what I was to do
Or if I was dreaming or not
Then he said it again
Get the fuck out here, it’s count time
I jumped to
My feet and headed to the door.
This new place
Didn’t have a fancy couch or marble Floors
Like my house did Instead everything was covered in the middle
And every bit of 50 doors on each each of the 2 levels And each door had 3 people in front of them and orange jumpsuit
Where am I ?? I said
I could see out my peripheral view.This old guy looking over at me.I leaned to him and asked
Hey sir where are we? 
Yous In St. Louis County penitentiary my boy
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