WRITING OBSTACLE

Inspired by Amber A

Use the metaphor of a fuse being lit and its impending explosion to represent a mental eruption of a strong emotion.

Consider how you will develop this metaphor with strong visual and emotional representation.

Bomb

The fuse is lit,

A bomb soon to explode,

That’s what I am,

‘Cause you put me into

Kill mode.


I’m about to erupt

Into a fit of rage,

So unless you wanna die,

Get the hell out of my way!


I’m a bomb who had their fuse

Lit,

Ready to explode,

Get the hell away from me

Before you suffer the wrath

Of my rage.


All the rage I’ve

Bottled up

Over the years,

It’s coming out

In a fiery

Burst of emotion,

Like a bomb’s

Explosion.

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