POEM STARTER

Submitted by Blossoming Flower

Ice Skating

Write a poem which could have this as the title. Consider that it might not literally be about ice-skating.

Ice Skating

Devils were laughing

- oh, how they laughed! -

throwing snowballs and lies

into your path.


β€œShe’s such a good girl!

So strong inside!

With such a big heart

that’s made of ice.

She said herself,

She is The Lake,

the Frozen Lake!

Why don’t you go

ice skating?

What is so wrong?

What harm is done,

if you just play

a little bit?”


Surprise, surprise,

You broke the ice!


Devils were laughing

- oh, how they laughed! -

Throwing fireballs and pain

upon your soul.


β€œShe’s such a good girl!

So strong inside!

With such a big heart

that’s made of fire,

a hidden fire,

under the ice!

She said herself,

She’s The Volcano,

The Burning Flame!

We know it well,

this heart of hers

- kingdom of dark,

kingdom of blaze -

For we all reign

Inside.”

Comments 5

this is beautiful!

Thank you! πŸ€—β£οΈ

Brilliant, love the flow and prose πŸ–€

Thank you, it means a lot! πŸ™πŸ’™