WRITING OBSTACLE

Describe a character that has a unique physical trait that sets them apart from others

Use descriptive language to create a clear appearance for the reader to imagine.

"It's like, um, unique, I guess?"

"Isn't it hot, Lenny?" My friend turned to me. Yes, it was a hot day, but I wouldn't take off my jacket for anything. "Nah, I'm fine." "There's no way you're not hot." "Oh, thank you," I winked at her. She slapped my shoulder, "oh shut up!" We laughed and continued talking about other things. I was thankful that we didn't talk more of it. There was a specific reason I always used jackets. ------------------------ It was the day to swim. Oh shoot, I have no long sleeve swimming suits. Well, I guess it's fine then. Just. Don't. Think. About. It. I looked at my reflection in my mirror. It was like tiny red fire ants were crawling up my arm. I was disgusted at the bumps on my skin. People always had clear, soft skin. I had these ugly scars. Every time I didn't use jackets, I would start to pick them out of anxiousness. I hated it. "Lenny!" I shook out of my frozen stare. "Lenora! Let's go!" My friends called for me again. "Yeah, um. I'm coming!" I pulled my towel over my arms and headed out. ------------------------ "Hey jump in with us! Or we'll push you in," We laughed, I took off the towel and immediately jumped in the pool. The faster I get in, the less time they have to look at my arms. "First time I've seen you without any sleeves," Freya told me. "Hehe yeah, I'm just usually cold." ------------------------ "Lenny, what's wrong with your arm?" Iyana asked. I froze. "I don't know what's wrong. Haha, I hate it. It's weird. My mom said it might be skin allergy or something." "Eh, it's not that weird. It's like, um, unique, I guess?" I felt like she was trying to comfort me, but it didn't do anything. I still hate it, but I can't change it. - Jeans
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