WRITING OBSTACLE

Describe a common scene (like a busy street or quiet park) in a way that evokes a specific emotion (e.g., loneliness, joy) without explicitly stating the emotion.

Use sensory details and imagery to convey the mood.

So long

Do you remember,

the clouds were frosted with pinks and golden tomorrows.

             and what of the setting sun?

whose flames extinguished from behind you on the plane.

Dusk kissed the palms who waved

good-bye with great fronds.

Night embraced the ancient cacti standing guard in the absence of light,

they tower in proud solute.

and the last rays skim over the land

broken glass and bits of shiny pebbles glisten, twinkling with the memories you leave behind.

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