Storm of Anger
it came upon me suddenly, with a roaring rage startling even the bravest. clouding my thoughts, drenching mind. anger has a way of storming into your life.
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it came upon me suddenly, with a roaring rage startling even the bravest. clouding my thoughts, drenching mind. anger has a way of storming into your life.
Love it! It’s as short and sudden as that which it describes.
“Clouding my thoughts, drenching my mind” it’s the cherry on top of a mighty fine ice cream sundae!
Bit of feedback: every line could be its own stanza. Any longer lines could be broken in to bites. For example:
It came upon me suddenly
With a roaring
Rage startling even the bravest
And so on :) Hope you find this helpful 🧚🏽♀️
jut a short piece :)
