The sun dipped down beneath my feet,
The moon tipping over my head.
The weight of day is lost to me,
The night envelops all.
I do not know this blinding light
I do not know this raging sound
I dwell forever in the stars
The sun will never rise again.
I’d like to go here *^*
The vertigo of this piece is intoxicating,
The imagery, the light, the pain, I could see the spots dancing behind my eyes with only a line, hear the mind shredding chaos of sound
Flawless, simply astonishing, great job as ALWAYS my dearest Noah :)
Love the line, “I dwell forever in the stars”, such a beautiful poem!
